Constructive Criticism Model ( In Class Ex B )
Ex: Apply constructive criticism model in evaluating the picture below
Forest as the background and the Avatar character in the center of the image.
Title is located on top left corner while a McDonald logo is located on the top right corner. This is a rasterize image.
This image emphasize on the Avatar character, I can deduce that they are advertising on the Avatar movie. The McDonald logo is far apart from the Avatar character and the size is relatively small, the effect of this is to show that McDonald is not the focus of the image.
Shortcomings :
1) This piece of work does not establish the the relationship between McDonald and Avatar.
2) No contrast between white text and background. McDonald logo also not very clear.
Success :
Forest as the background and the Avatar character in the center of the image.
Title is located on top left corner while a McDonald logo is located on the top right corner. This is a rasterize image.
This image emphasize on the Avatar character, I can deduce that they are advertising on the Avatar movie. The McDonald logo is far apart from the Avatar character and the size is relatively small, the effect of this is to show that McDonald is not the focus of the image.
Shortcomings :
1) This piece of work does not establish the the relationship between McDonald and Avatar.
2) No contrast between white text and background. McDonald logo also not very clear.
Success :