Assignment 1A Critique Session
After presenting my 2 rough draft, below are comments that I got from the tutor and classmates.
Assignment 1A Rough Draft Part 1
Even though I don't intend to use as my final prototype for assignment 1, but the comment I received was I should make the shopping bag more obvious (over flow with items) and put it infront of me to show how much I love shopping.
Assignment 1A Rough Draft Part 2
During small group discussion, my group mate suggested using the draft without the background elements as he finds it quite cluttered. After presenting it to the class, one feedback that I received from the class mate was that I should combine both rough draft together. She proposed using half of rough draft Part 2 each to show both periods that happened in the playground, and adding a hand to make it look like I'm looking back into my memories through a photograph.
Assignment 1A Rough Draft Part 1
Even though I don't intend to use as my final prototype for assignment 1, but the comment I received was I should make the shopping bag more obvious (over flow with items) and put it infront of me to show how much I love shopping.
Assignment 1A Rough Draft Part 2
During small group discussion, my group mate suggested using the draft without the background elements as he finds it quite cluttered. After presenting it to the class, one feedback that I received from the class mate was that I should combine both rough draft together. She proposed using half of rough draft Part 2 each to show both periods that happened in the playground, and adding a hand to make it look like I'm looking back into my memories through a photograph.