Some of the classmates prefer the idea on "The magical fridge", despite that our group still decides to proceed with our final idea presented today.

Comments received from the class was:

• We should add in more frames to describe how Edward, our main character being able to find sweets/chocolates from the fridge when his mother doesn't allow him to eat that. One of the classmate suggested having Edward secretly buy sweets from his school canteen and keep it inside the refrigerator.
• One of the classmate also pointed out that there are grammatical errors in our story, which we need to correct.
• We might have to change the use of the word "anesthetic" as the kids might not be able to read/understand it.