Assignment 4 Critique session

Category: By Sherilyn
Comments received from Zhong han in small group discussion:
  • Able to tell the concept of traveling
  • Need to improve on the color exploration
Comments received from the class/tutor:
  • Need more color exploration
  • Don't need stars background
  • Shouldn't cut off the lady below
  • Can have different countries as background
  • Can extend the globe to the back of the postcard
  • Can have silhouette of human and add more details to the luggage
  • Can have only different luggage moving on land.
 

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