Assignment 1 Final Prototype Critique Session
After presenting my final prototype for assignment 1, below are comments from the tutors and classmates.
1) Too bright/glaring color on the left portion of the image. Not much of a contrast between the sky and playground. Can try to use lighter tone of blue for the sky.
2) Kind of empty, can try to add sun on the top left corner.
3) Remove away the photograph border and hand.
I realised that I interpret wrongly about adding the border and hand for the final prototype. It should be the hand holding the photo of the past and comparing it with the current status of the "playground".
1) Too bright/glaring color on the left portion of the image. Not much of a contrast between the sky and playground. Can try to use lighter tone of blue for the sky.
2) Kind of empty, can try to add sun on the top left corner.
3) Remove away the photograph border and hand.
I realised that I interpret wrongly about adding the border and hand for the final prototype. It should be the hand holding the photo of the past and comparing it with the current status of the "playground".