Assignment 2 Critique Session
After presenting the process of abstraction for assignment 2, below are the comments given by the tutor and classmates.
1)The visual statement for the Justin Bieber and Sean Kingston is not very strong as compared to the visual statement for Avril Lavigne and Taylor Swift
2)In terms of visual, Justin Bieber and Sean Kingston abstraction process is better executed than the Avril Lavigne and Taylor Swift
3)Can further abstract on the of Avril Lavigne and Taylor Swift piece.
Result: Whole class seems to encourage me to use Justin Bieber and Sean Kingston for the abstraction assignment.
Reflection
I didn't really formulate well the visual statement for the abstraction of Justin Bieber and Sean Kingston unlike the other one. Unfortunately, I don't get as many comments as the assignment 1, so I'm still quite lost as in what else I can do to improve on this assignment. More likely, I will explore more on the piece on Avril Lavigne and Taylor Swift.
1)The visual statement for the Justin Bieber and Sean Kingston is not very strong as compared to the visual statement for Avril Lavigne and Taylor Swift
2)In terms of visual, Justin Bieber and Sean Kingston abstraction process is better executed than the Avril Lavigne and Taylor Swift
3)Can further abstract on the of Avril Lavigne and Taylor Swift piece.
Result: Whole class seems to encourage me to use Justin Bieber and Sean Kingston for the abstraction assignment.
Reflection
I didn't really formulate well the visual statement for the abstraction of Justin Bieber and Sean Kingston unlike the other one. Unfortunately, I don't get as many comments as the assignment 1, so I'm still quite lost as in what else I can do to improve on this assignment. More likely, I will explore more on the piece on Avril Lavigne and Taylor Swift.